Script - Revised

I have compiled the scenes that each of us have written, except for The Human Race because I can't find it and no one has sent it to me and Deal or No Deal because Chloe merged the two Deal or No Deal scenes into one so we've just got to sort that out.

Feedback from Ms Bones

The need to ask questions of the audience

Quotes re; happiness from a variety of religous, philosophical and economic perspectives
Needs some naturalism

Consider use of music an sound on the themes of happiness/sadness - even the blues perhaps

Need to work on the physicalisation of your character - refer to Kerry's notes from The Trial

Why is Livvie a loser - needs more detail

What jouney are we going on - who's story are you telling - what is the function of all the subsidiary characters

Winner v. Loser implies a competition - this needs a defining

You will need to plan ahead for Chloe's absence in order to maximise and manage your time efficently

remember that we need to see a juxtaposition of style AND content - but this needs to be balanced