The need to ask questions of the audience
Quotes re; happiness from a variety of religous, philosophical and economic perspectives
Needs some naturalism
Consider use of music an sound on the themes of happiness/sadness - even the blues perhaps
Need to work on the physicalisation of your character - refer to Kerry's notes from The Trial
Why is Livvie a loser - needs more detail
What jouney are we going on - who's story are you telling - what is the function of all the subsidiary characters
Winner v. Loser implies a competition - this needs a defining
You will need to plan ahead for Chloe's absence in order to maximise and manage your time efficently
remember that we need to see a juxtaposition of style AND content - but this needs to be balanced
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